Xander relaxes at the kitchen table sneakily watching porn while his girlfriend makes some coffee. Her sexy friend Mariana joins him at the table and tries to make small talk but can tell Xander’s distracted. Brazzers porn When his girlfriend walks over with coffee for them, Xander quickly closes his laptop and Mariana figures out that he’s watching porn! When his girlfriend leaves Mariana playfully flirts with Xander, flashing him her big perfect tits before giving a sneaky BJ under the table. When they’re almost caught, Mariana drags him to the bathroom where they fuck until almost getting busted again! When they try fucking in the bedroom next Xander’s girlfriend finally busts them, but Xander and Mariana keep going until he gives her a huge facial…Then gets dragged away by his irate girlfriend!
You just need to read some of the more professional written stories and study how they start, what is the midway content and HOW TO END THEM !! The kid’s mother could’ve been suckin’ his dick while they watch TV. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-25 23:30:39This was super short, but it was alright. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-25 23:30:39This was super short, but it was alright. (countrycadillac)«1» I mean you have a lot of work to do before these start to get more popular like, maybe more reluctance, or more descriptions, describe what happens instead of avoiding it by saying “After thirty minutes” and things like that. So I hope part 3 is a bit longer and full of fuckin’ here and there and everywhere. (countrycadillac)«1» I mean you have a lot of work to do before these start to get more popular like, maybe more reluctance, or more descriptions, describe what happens instead of avoiding it by saying “After thirty minutes” and things like that. I still give you a Positive on your general work. Good luck with your story. I nice slow suck that makes him suffer a little, so that when he does cum, it’s well worth it.
